(22) Blogging Health Check 1

Rohima, you begin to make a promising start but there is lots of work missing and the level of detail is inconsistent, which is affecting the mark that you are currently attaining in this part of the coursework.  Please read through the feedback below and complete the to do / targets for improvement list at the bottom, to ensure that you develop your blog in a way that can help you attain a mark that is more reflective of your potential.

strengths:
- most completed posts are detailed
- some evidence of research into similar products
- clearly presented

weaknesses:
- lots of work missing
- time management - most work posted on just 2 days (3/10 and 11/10)
- reliance on text to post your work

to do / targets for improvement:
1. complete any missing blogging tasks with priority given to 2, 7, 12,13,15 and 17
2. improve your frequency of posting to the blog - aim for 3 or 4 x weekly
3. be more creative with using ICT and digital apps to present your work visually
4. maintain the level of detail seen in, for example, post 10. Be consistent with the level of analysis and explanation that you offer across all your work.