(53) Blogging Health Check 3

Feedback:

43 posts out of a possible 51 at health check 3.  There is some improvement here Ryanna which is good to see - you've gone back and completed some of the missing posts at health check 2.  As we move into the final stages of the project there are some things that you will need to do in order to pull this grade into the B area (14+).  So set aside an hour or two over the holidays to sort the following:

1. Get the order of the blogs roughly right - at the moment you are a bit all over the place with some late research posts posted after you've started filming.  This will confuse the moderator (and confuses me a bit too).  Use the SWOT analysis hand-out that I gave you on Wednesday to do your self audit and work out where the gaps are and which order things should be in.  Doing this alone will help you increase your mark by 1 already.

2. Can you complete the missing posts - 26 (important audience post) and 46 (evidence of the filming sessions).  At the moment there isn't any evidence that filming took place beyond the rough cut - read the blogging checklist for guidance as to how to present this.

3. In conjunction with your group can you move the draft production schedule to a more suitable place - at the moment it's posted AFTER the final production schedule which doesn't make sense.
Great potential for a B or even higher if you are able to tidy the blog up a bit. You can do it...

My Response:

To improve my grade I will arrange my blog posts in order so that it is more easier to tell what blog posts are missing. I also will include evidence of filming and post it as a blog. As a group we need to move the draft production to a more suitable place.