Feedback:
Rohima, your blog is very promising and suggests lots of potential. You have a reasonable blog post count of 48 at the time of marking but, since the pitch your blog and evidence of your coursework, has become less strong and there are big gaps in your blog with little evidence of your filming or editing. It is essential that you read through the feedback below and complete the to do / targets at the bottom of the page - as if you do not improve your frequency of posting or provide evidence of filming or drafting, your blogging mark is likely to drop further, which would be a pity and certainly wouldn't reflect the hard work, creativity and potential that I see in class.strengths:
- nice planning evidence
- nice use of ICT
- some reflection in your posts
- most planning tasks completed and detailed
weaknesses:
- time management - big gap between 30/11 an 16/12
- order of blog tasks is haphazard eg draft production schedule is after the final production schedule - there needs to be a logical order to your posts
- no evidence of filming or organised use of actors / locations
- no evidence of editing
My response:
I will start to update my blog at least once or twice a week outside of lesson or in lesson making sure that I keep my blog active rather than keeping a big gap in blog posting.I will also make sure to include my evidence of filming as a group and the evidence of editing our title sequence. I will also make sure that I keep my blog posts organised by putting the posts on logical order based on the timeline of our posts.
SMART TARGETS:

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